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PostSubject: Wakahisa Clan (FINISHED)   Sun May 08, 2011 12:01 am

Clan Surname: Wakahisa
Clan Insignia: http://mobi-wall.brothersoft.com/files/208208/j/12829072906599.jpg






Formation of the Clan: The clan's founder was Kappu, his original surname was not Wakahisa, when he 25, he was part of a group of ninja. When he turned 40, he was referred to as 'Wakahisa', due to the fact, that he was 40, and still had the face of a 25 year old. When he was young, his parents had abandoned him, but had kept their name. For this reason, he changed his surname to 'Wakahisa', and eventually settled down.

Kappu, had left his village with his group of friends, when he was 30, he went to a small section of a forest, and began to settle there, along with his future wife, and future clan mates, the village was quite small, but quite peaceful, and it gained some fame, amoungst the locals. Some merchants eventually came around the village, so that the village could purchase things.

Kappu had a son, but the son began to have some strange traits. When he was 5, he began to grow a mark on his arm, the mark eventaully became the insignia for the clan. Kappu's son eventually had 3 kids, 2 boys and 1 girl, and each child from there had the insignia on their arm, though it appeared on some earlier than it appeared on others.
Village: Sunagakure

Kekkai Genkkai:

The Kuroi Hitomi is the Kekkai Genkkai of the Wakahisa clan, although the clan founder did not master this move. It was first shown by his son. The bearer of the Kuroi Hitomi will start to exhibit a insignia on his weaker arm, it will be the clan insignia. The Kuroi Hitomi is a manipulation of the darkness, and therefore, a majority of the Wakahisa's are born with good eyesight, and can see well in the dark.

The Kuroi Hitomi has 3 phases, the activation phase, where the child first bares the mark, nothing happens at his phase, as it is simply proof that the child is a Wakahisa. The next phase is phase 1, the child's mark will start to grow in length. The child will now be able to do the 2 basic clan jutsu (Strike Of The Bull and K.O Punch). The next phase is phase 2, the mark will grow even longer. Many Wakahisa's are peaceful people and some never become shinobi, so it is a rare occurance when a shinobi reaches this level, as you must be pushed to your limit, before the mark grows longer.

The final phase is the Kanzenna Kurayami. This allows the user to use the three special clan jutsu, though 2 of them are forbidden ( Shōtotsu and Shi No Kuchi). The mark will now grow until it reaches the user's hand, his eyes turn pitch black, but retains all vision.



Clan Jutsu:
Name: Kuroi Hitomi Activation
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Though not really a jutsu, more of a phase. When a Wakahisa child is around 10 years of age (there are special cases, as Kappu's son was born with it), the insignia of the clan will appear on the child's weaker arm, just below their shoulders. If they are left handed, it appears on their right hand, and so on. It doesn't really do anything, but is proof that the child is Wakahisa.

Name: Kuroi Hitomi Phase 1
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: The insignia on the child's arm begins to grow in length. This allows the child to do the basic clan jutsu. This normally happens when the child is 10.

Name: Strike Of The Bull
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user rams into his opponent with his weaker arm, with Kuroi Hitomi Phase 1 activated. The strength of the ram will be that of a bull. The Kuroi Hitomi Phase 1, basically strengthen's the weaker arm.


Name: Kuroi Hitomi Phase 2.
Rank: B
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: The next phase of the Kuroi Hitomi. Some Wakahisa's never reach this phase, as the move is not a natural occurance. The insignia begins to grow in length once again, but will only appear, when having been pushed to the limit whether in a sparring match, or when training.

Name: Darkness Unleashed: Shrouded Prison.
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: The user does handsigns, throwing out his chakra, unleashing a dark energy that shrouds the user in a small dome prision, protecting him.

Name: Darkness Unleashed: Point Of No Return.
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: If/when a opponent is knocked out, this genjutsu can be done, it enters the mind of the opponent, and paralyses them.

Name: Kuromi Hitomi: Kanzenna Kurayami
Rank: N/A
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: The final phase of the Kuroi Hitomi Kekkei Genkkai. The insignia finally reaches the hand of the user, the user's eyes turn pitch black, though they retain their vision (there eyes are black, but they can see normally.). This allows them to use 3 of the clan's most powerful jutsu, but 2 of them are forbidden. This form can only be retained for a limited amount of time. The user can see perfectly in the dark, while in this form.

Name: Darkness Release: Mage Tengoku
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: The user puts his hand on the insignia (in the Kuroi Hitomi: Kanzenna Kuryami form), he manipulates the chakra in his body, and forces it into his hand, it then forms a black ball, filled with chakra (that is black), before unleashing it on the opponent. (In broad terms, the user puts his hands on the insignia, and then uses it like the chidori or rasegan, except its black). The hit will be aimed at the opponents chest, when it hits, it drains the opponent of most of his chakra.

(NOTE: It doesn't take ALL of his chakra, also, it does damage too, but not as much as the chidori or Rasegan.)

Name: Darkness Release: Shi no kuchi
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: The user does the handsigns (with in the Kuroi Hitomi form), he puts his hand on his insignia before, putting some chakra into his hand, he then throws the dark stream at the opponent. The stream primarily aims for the opponent's hands, covering them in dark energy, not allowing them to do any hand signs, if it hits their feet, it will numb their feet, making them slower. (Like the ameratsu, mind the spelling. The move that Itachi and Sasuke did)

Name: Darkness Release: Shōtotsu
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: The user creates 10 shadow clones, made purely of dark energy from his chakra, he then puts his hand on his insignia, and puts a 3/4 of his chakra into his hand, he then uses it to turn the battlefield completely dark, the opponent will be unable to move his feet, or see. The 10 clones then attack the opponent, while the user rests.

(NOTE: The battlefield will turn into compelete darkness, but only 20 feet from where the user is. So, if the opponent is 10 feet away, and is caught by the move, he will be covered in darkness, BUT, if he is like 50 feet away, he will be safe. Also, the opponent can move. Just trying not to overpower Razz.)


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(Tell me if any mistakes were made.)


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PostSubject: Re: Wakahisa Clan (FINISHED)   Sun May 08, 2011 12:35 am

M'kay. I understand what you mean by the clan, but 'dark' is not something you can control. Darkness is lack of light. The reason people can't see in the dark isn't because their eyes suck, it's because there's no light to provide vision. The reason certain animals can see in the dark is due X-rays and other wavelengths of light constantly being emitted by the sun and other stars. To cut it short, your character will be allowed to see in the dark should they be outside. But not if they're in an air-tight box like a window-less house.

Also, what your technique says and does makes no sense. I'll allow it if you change it to "Dark chakra", in which they can use these techniques. But things like "Blanket in darkness" would be logically impossible. Darkness is not a substance as I mentioned above. Also, perfect vision in the dark is impossible for the above reasons. It's not like the person can see exactly as they would in the day, obviously because there is no sun to provide such large amounts of light.

@ Strike of Bull and K.O Punch, they're basically the same. Add to K.O Punch either a secondary effect or just state that it's a weaker form of Strike of Bull.

@ Phase one. Change the rank to E.

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Name: Darkness Unleashed: Point Of No Return.
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: The user (with Kuroi Hitomi Phase 2 activated) enters into the mind of the opponent, making believe that the opponent is in a different reality and that he is stuck in a dark place, where he cannot see or move. This paralyses the opponent for a while. It lasts for 20 minutes, unless the opponent repels it.
20 minutes is far too long for this technique to work. Also, it's a Genjutsu, which means you have to do something that will make the enemy watch you and fall under the trance. Simply entering the mind is God/Mod and Auto-Hitting. Also, this technique is basically the same as Sandaime/Shodai Hokage's darkness technique which I forget the name of. Its effects are practically the same too.

Quote :
Name: Darkness Release: Mage Tengoku
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: The user puts his hand on the insignia (in the Kuroi Hitomi: Kanzenna Kuryami form), he manipulates the chakra in his body, and forces it into his hand, it then forms a black ball, filled with chakra (that is black), before unleashing it on the opponent. (In broad terms, the user puts his hands on the insignia, and then uses it like the chidori or rasegan, except its black).
As much as I hate how much of a rip-off and clone this is of Sasuke's black chidori, I can't deny it under moral grounds. The technique just cannot be a direct copy of either Chidori or Rasengan. It can't for instance shock the enemy or drill into them like the two techniques.

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Name: Darkness Release: Shi no kuchi
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: The user does the handsigns (with in the Kuroi Hitomi form), he puts his hand on his insignia before, putting all the chakra in his body into his hand, he then throws the dark stream at the opponent. (Like the ameratsu, mind the spelling. The move that Itachi and Sasuke did)
Amaterasu is an S rank Enton element technique. Also, if it's like the Amaterasu, explain what the 'dark stream' can actually do. At this point it's a basic waste of all your chakra.

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Name: Darkness Release: Shōtotsu
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness
Description: The user creates two shadow clones (actual clones that can be felt, not illusion clones), made of pure darkness. He then stores all the chakra left in his body into both of his palms, he then releases it, turning the battle field into complete darkness. Like the 'Point Of No Return' jutsu, but its not a genjutsu. The shadow clones will then go after the opponent, while the user passes out, due to the lack of chakra in his body.
This attack is kinda... Bad. xD You do realize that shadow clones can be killed VERY easily, and using up every ounce of chakra will make you completely invulnerable. It's not that this technique is OVER powered, it's actually UNDER powered. Removing one's sense of sight isn't that great. They can learn to adapt to just hearing.
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PostSubject: Re: Wakahisa Clan (FINISHED)   Sun May 08, 2011 12:39 am

I'll edit it accordingly, also, for the last thing, the opponent can't see, so the clones are just gonna keep bagging on him.
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PostSubject: Re: Wakahisa Clan (FINISHED)   Sun May 08, 2011 12:41 am

I know that they can't see the clones, but they can still hear the clones. If the jutsu removes sound and site, it would be viable for an S rank. Right now you can just keep it as A rank. A really complex A rank though o~o;
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PostSubject: Re: Wakahisa Clan (FINISHED)   Sun May 08, 2011 12:52 am

I'll edit it, it does seem sorta weak if you put it like that. Maybe I could sent out dozens of clones, or make the opponent unable to move, or something.

EDIT: I think this is the final version, if any mistakes, tell me please Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Wakahisa Clan (FINISHED)   Fri May 13, 2011 6:40 pm

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