Draco Akumei

Name: Draco Akumei
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Village: Missing Ninja





Height: 7'0"
Weight: 235 lbs
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Looks Description: The physical state Draco is in could only be described as "greek god". He has thick sturdy muscles, and a six pack, though he is thin, for his hieght at least. His hair is a deep red, as if it was soaked in blood for days, never to change. His face is calm and relaxing. He has an average jaw, but slightly gaunt cheek lines, making him very attractive. He has the hair of madara, but the face of Itachi. He has dark "bags" under his eyes from lack of sleep, even though he doesnt need it.

When smiling he has the craziest and creepiest smile you could ever imagine, making him very intimidating and oddly scary. His appearence is that of a tired man who has experienced more than even the oldest shinobi. Though he appears slightly aged, he is actually very young, but also very experienced. His physical appearance shows a serious young prodigy, however his past is damn near the exact opposite. His state of physical condition is far from what he truly is.

His clothes make him look extremely different from normal ninja. A normal ninja would dress in dark colors, blue or green for most, however he perfers red and black. He does not blend in very well. He doesnt need to hide, is why he claims he can wear black and red. His shirt is dark red, as if a man with high iron, and high blood pressure bled on it, soaking it in its dark embrace of color. He wears a chainmail shirt underneath that, which is able to conduct chakra. He usually wears a black jacket on top of that, made with steel plates, made everyone but the joint areas, allowing him top manueverability while maintaining the same defense properties. His pants are made the same way, even with a built in protective cup. The darkness of his pants are not black, that would be saying that midnight is equal to the sun. His jacket and pants are actually darker than black. He usually leaves his jacket open, which shows off his chest through his skin tight shirt. Though when he does not wish to be noticed, he wears a black cloak with a red inside. He also wears a mask, covering all of his face besides his eyes and forhead. Oddly enough, his eyes appear to have rinnegan, however he has no abilities of it





Personality Description: The one thing that describes Draco's personality is one word that makes men cry, women beg, and dogs howl. Insanity. Draco is litteraly conflicted by every emotion there is, not understanding many of them, but knowing they are there, even though he has complete control of them, they annoy him constantly. His ruling emotions are nuetrality and love. He lacked love growing up and seeks it constantly as a man. Some see him as a manwhore, or a womanizer, the truth is he just wishes to be loved. Once he finds a single woman he loves he will settle down, until then he might as well have a hell of a time, right? To be honest he is deeply lonely, as part of his depriving childhood. He has few things he hates, but one thing that manages to bring out his true hatred, and that is arrogance. While he himself remains slightly prideful, he knows he can be beat, and hates when people act as though they are better than anyone else.

His true hatred lies within those who are prideful yet cannot back it up. He also hates those who look down on themselves for things others have done to them, or those who overdramatize with the situation. His way of looking at things is, if you have power and interefere, you need experience, if you have power, but manipulate events to better yourself and your allies, you are truly magnificent. He respects intelligence, holding an IQ of 153. He also loves making people feel fear, an odd effect of his powers.
Likes: Sex, Tentacles, Control, being Dominated
Dislikes: No sex, lack of control
Lifetime Goals: Taking over the world, then destroying all corruption
Role: Want: God, Deserve: Leader



Rank: A ranked Missing Ninja
Jutsu Specialist:
Main: Fuinjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Bloodline: Kaguya
Elements: Lightning, Fire, Water
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Stats: 115 + Class bonuses

Physical Stats
Speed: 58
Stamina: 20
Strength: 25
Agility: 20
Physical Endurance: 15

Chakra Stats:
Chakra Reserves: 10

Mental Stats
Intelligence: 32

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RP Sample: The man beside him was oddly tall, and very fit, likely more so than Zane himself, but this man had no true benefit like the gates, elements were his true powers, powers that were beyond normal comparison. He could have used another power, but for now, these ones could do. Simply put, he wished for one last thing to add to his asortment of powers. The rinnegan. Such an eye would be the final ingredient to his final power. The man was dressed oddly for such an occassion, considering he was in simple black and red. His shirt was red with the words "those who dont have the strength to stand for themselves, should fall down and die" on it. Truly, these words were the meaning behind this attack, but admittedly, mostly it was due to a recent lack of funds the tsuchikage felt himself having. His jacket, which had steel plates inside was darker than the blackest void, along with his jeans having the same style and quality, even laid out with steel in the same way, avoiding the joints, but allowing most coverage.

For many reasons this man had been annoyed. Currently, the council was trying to keep him from destroying Ame, after he heard of the Amekage's attack, he had wanted to retaliate, however Zanza did not allow him to, now he could. Perhaps here he could find a fun fighter to duel, if not it was a good source of funding, perhaps he would take over another village the following week.

The gates infront of them were oddly open and relaxed gaurds. To the gaurds Roran simply seemed normal, but Zane was an oddity they were quite worried about. With a simple flick of the wrist, Roran sent lightning into their necks, overloading their brains and frying them. The pathetic chuunin had no chance to dodge. Roran actually scared the people more, for his odd resemblence to the legendary Pein, even though Zane was close behind in the fear factor. Of course Roran's neuron editing allowed him to make that fear into a Phobia, making most lower ranking Ninja run from them.

"I could not care less what you do Zane, I am going to destroy everything though, so to put it simply... Have fun with this." With that stated Roran began setting the gates on fire, burning them rather fast, even with the constant rain. It was hard to use fire in the rain, but if he created it from electricity, it would be strong enough to hold up. This entire village was now their plaything. Roran had made that clear by his sentence. The fire began to spread to buildings, burning many alive. Roran himself stopped a moment. "if you want, you could kill the kage, I dont care, try to leave a few gennin and chuunin though, or anyone willing to join Iwa, we can always use torture to.. persuade them" He chuckled.

His hair blew as the fire burned the buildings, an effect from the wind. Suddenly a large explosion happened a few blocks away, appearently a building has some sort of gas leak, allowing the fire to make it explode, which gave Roran and amazing idea. He took out shekkeikegan and began slicing civilians in the steet, before getting more towards the ninja section of the village, amazingly enough, this happened incredibly fast, the fire spreading as if it was lit with oil, and Roran moving at half his speed, but allowing him to see lower ranks and civilians in slow motion, cutting them down with ease.

It was rather clear to everyone by this fraction of a minute, that Amegakure was being attacked. May god have mercy on their souls, because Roran would not. The civilians had tried running, but most had been slaughtered as soon as they ran from the burning houses, thanks to shekkeikegan's weilder's speed. This village was as good as dead now, the rain had appearently slowed to a halt, barely falling now, as if god had tightened the faucet over Ame, knowing he would need to save water to wash away the blood stains.
RP Test

I dont have senju, or uchiha KKG, its simply stating the cause of the clan, since I dont intend others to join it, I'll make the clan, remove the seals, and chidori, is that all?

Edited to a cannon bloodline.

Two small problems I see first off, I'll keep checking but, for now!

Firstly; Illusion of Lightning is actually a genjutsu, an elemental genjutsu. Also, Kaguya jutsu are mainly taijutsu, so I'd advise having that and learning fuuinjutsu later if you want to use any clan jutsu.

Also, magnetic jutsu would be a KKG ability, the same used by the Third Kazekage to produce magnetic chakra which in turn create iron sand techniques. Will edit anything else I see.

its NOT a genjutsu, genjutsu are illusions, this is... different, Genjutsu use chakra on the senses, this uses electricity to produce THC, it is in no way a genjutsu. and I dont care for the clan jutsu, which in truth are just styles of fighting and shooting bones out of your fingers.

electricity has been proven to cause magnetism, he doesnt use control over magnetism, he uses control over lightning, keeping it from being a KKG

Then wh- Not gonna go there.

Anyway, the lightning jutsu in question is..basically exactly the same as the Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar techniques used by C in the anime, down to a T. So, rename it and give it genjutsu and you can have it..when you learn genjutsu.

And I don't really care -how- you create it, it's still magnetic chakra, which is a KKG. Remove that please. Thank you

...how is it in any way shape or form even close to lightning pillar? Yes it disturbs the senses, but so many jutsu do that its not even funny anymore.. and it uses lightning, thats nothing... and as I said, it ISNT a genjutsu.. its physical, simply adding THC to the body, pretty much touching someone gets them high.. and here is a quote on what exactly genjutsu is.

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Genjutsu (幻術; Literally meaning "Illusionary Techniques") are techniques that are employed in the same fashion as ninjutsu, requiring chakra and hand seals. However, the primary difference between the two is that the effects of genjutsu are illusory; instead of attacking the victim's body, like taijutsu or ninjutsu, genjutsu techniques manipulate the flow of chakra in the victim's brain, thus causing a disruption in their senses

I dont manipulate their chakra flow, I add THC, which causes the brain to get high, if anything its more like a poison jutsu.

Hidden mist technique is Mist ninja only. Either remove it or make your character ex-Kiri. Also, you're not allowed 3 elements to start with. Only kage and (I think) S rank missing nin are allowed 3 elements to start.

To add; your Illusion of Lightning IS in fact a Genjutsu. Genjutsu are effects over the senses, not just illusions. You just stated that yourself in your little quote. If you want even a chance to get this technique passed without Genjutsu, you'll need Medical Ninjutsu as this affects the target's body to the chemical level and the average ninja is a moron when it comes to how the body functions. The technique is over-powered as it is. A six post hallucination that removes their main senses of location wont get approved anytime soon. You can kill the sitting duck on the second post.

it doesnt remove their sense of location.. have you ever even been high? even slightly? and they snap out of it in half a post, but the enhancement on the senses which comes from being high stays for 6 senses, and it is NOT an illusion, genjutsu is an illusion, it is truly getting high.

Denied. I asked repeatedly for you to rectify mistakes in your profile, you refused, if you can't do that, then the profile isn't going to be accepted.