Buying a jutsu

Name: Paralyzing Web Cocoon
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu and Taijutsu
Sub-Class: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Short Range when making the Cocoon and any range once it is done.
Chakra Use: med ( Every three posts it costs as much as a low power C-rank to maintain.)
Charge Time: 4sec
Duration: 9 posts max (like this you mean)
Description: To do this the user must use chakra to increases their speed and run around their opponent. To first start the jutsu the user must make a few hand signs which cause the users hands to create webs from the finger tips. The user should run forward and simply tap the opponent anywhere and attach the web to them and then begin to run as they create a complex web. They continue to run till the opponent is completely covered in the spider web and then the user can stay there or move as far back as they like and the opponent should now be paralyzed. As the web was first placed on them it paralyzes anything it touches like if she ran completely around the opponent’s chest and wrapped their arms together they wouldn’t be able to move them. Once the jutsu is done keeping up the paralyzing web cocoon costs a steady amount of chakra.

Name: Masked Comrades
Rank: C - Rank
Type: Genjutsu
Sub-Class: Supplementary
Element: None
Range: Any Range
Chakra Use: med
Charge Time: 5sec
Duration: 2 posts
Description: The user merely needs to make a few hand signs and be able to see the enemy for this genjutsu to start. This usually is used after an explosion or something which would cause the team to temporarily separate. The user will fool the enemies mind to make them think that their allies are really their enemies and enemies are their allies. Since this is genjutsu it fools the brain into switching up the voices and the looks of them both. This can cause the opponent to attack an ally believing it is the enemy and try to take him out. No one else can see this illusion except for the one chosen causing the teammates to have to figure out if they should attack their teammate or not.




2 C-rank = 20 points
69 - 20 = 49

Sorry this took so long. They seem good. The first one needs a higher chakra cost to maintain, or a set duration, as it basically allows you free reign over an opponent when they're bound. It'd work on the series, but we're a RP so we need some sense of chance for each player in a fight. And I don't get the second one. Does it surround them with illusionary needles, or actual needles? If real needles, creating such a vast amount is B to A rank in power.

Okayyy i will fix them right now but I will wait off on the 2nd one.

It was supposed to be that illusionary needles and actual needles are created. The illusionary needles would be created all over making it seem like there are barley any ways to escape. There are a few small openings that can be spotted if you look for them and it tricks the opponent into running that way to escape. In those small areas the user created needles out of wind that because of the genjutsu are not seen and that way the enemy runs into them.

Hmmm Yahh maybe it is like a B-rank i will wait till i can get it. ^^

In the mean time i have a different one i would like to get i guess. I edited the post above and added it instead of the 2nd one.

I am gonna say make the Genjutsu a C rank and give it a higher cost/set duration. I've seen a character on a seperate forum based entirely around an illusion like that, so it's pretty powerful. The set duration is for the same reason I asked the cocoon to have one.

I fixed it I think i wasn't sure what to do for the duration so i put a max amount on how many posts it will work for even though it costs more chakra after holding it every 3 posts. If it working for 9 posts is too much i can change it to six as the max. Is that what you meant? Also the higher cost? Should it be higher then a med cost even though thats the normal cost for C-rank i think...?

I like it. approved.